She was falling but it was coming to an end. It might be a dream but she did not think so. She went thru a naro passageway to a land made of candy. She was in candy land. It did not seem to be all candy.she met a rabbit could candy. Candy (the rabbit) lead her to her home. In her bed she lay when she heard her mom's voice she got up for breakfast was it a dream. she was not shor. When she found candy she knew that it was not a dream. It was the best day ever it was the great for her. Now every time on the 24 th of february this happens every year. If you did not know this is a fairy tale.
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