paragraphs 2017

We have learnt to write paragraphs we T.P.T.P. this tells us when to start a new paragraph. It stands for: time, place, topic and person. Here are some samples that i wrote:

The classroom was full of different furniture. Long tables and the tall tables are cool. the long tables are dark blue. The tall tables are used for learning.

the playground at oratia primary is amazing. The playground is all different colors. The playground is used for using lots of energy. 

The school pool is  down the back by room 15. The pool is blue and white. The swimming pool is used for swimming. 

Now i know how to use paragraphs in my writing. Paragraphs are meant to be in writing mostly.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           

student led conference reflection

At the beginning i felt Nevis. In the middle in was not so Nevis but still a little Nevis. At the end i was proud. I shared all my learning from term 2. I would link my all about me in the presentation. Feedback is good job but get orgaised before hand. My favorite part was the whole  presentation.